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Vivid Dreams - Reality

My dreams,
I think
are becoming
reality.
I dream myself
drowning,
and end up
wet.
I dream i see
a beautiful field
and i end up
outside.
I dream
of a world
where
everything
is peaceful,
and i wake up
with my stereo
unplugged.
But why,
if my dreams,
are occurring,
with such
a vivid nature,
do i never
end up
further away
than my garden,
when my favourite,
and most
reoccuring dream
is the one
where i leave
and never come back.
Such vivid dreams,
becoming reality,
except the ones
i wish
were real.

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  • DesolatELifE
    April 19

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    I think this is absolutely wonderful. I especially like
    'But why,
    if my dreams,
    are occurring,
    with such
    a vivid nature,
    do i never
    end up
    further away
    than my garden,'
    idea =] x