The ink flows smoothly on the paper
As it’s blotched spots splatter from
My tear stain finding its way through
The abyss that is dense with hate and
Sorrows allure for agony in my mind
With it’s frail state of urgency to defile
My mystic ways into pure trauma
And dangerous waves of death leading
To a tragic funeral of my frantic soul
Staring into the twilight that is induced
By the shear velocity of hurt, I find that
I feel stark naked in this world and see
From the outside in that if I detach any
Further, I will be nothing but a slight
Glimpse of imagination in an incoherent
Lullaby sung by deaths morbid sense of
Humor that should not have been brought
Up in this delicate matter of my so called life
Fluttering with utter anger, I find that I don’t
Even need the shrouded silence to fill my days
With glorified stupidity and anxiety that was
Tangled into my veins with hushed trust that
Misled me with the detained warrant of breath
That was severed into ghostly desire which never
Will perish from my etched in body filled with lithium
Giving me an inhabited reality of false sense of
Security over my obsession with killing everything
Moments of my life’s origin leading to me in a crumble
Of endless nothing makes sadness descend upon me in
A labyrinth of not so innocent insanity being pledge to
As if it were a shrine of good faith that could be taken
Upon other’s setting up siege in my warped brain only
To find a hollow ground of secrecy brought out in a
Flare up from medications being destroyed instead of
Taken by me so that I could merge myself once more
With insanities calling of death to take me home
Author notes
I know this is a little odd, but I found the title Suicide's Mind to be realitively easy to work with on the word bank. I used every word in the word bank as it was listed in the word bank. The poem is dark and definately weird, and it is that way because I took it from a person's point of view that was suicidal
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- ♥Wordbank and titles contest♥ by OurxBeginning.
500 points, ended March 25, 2007, 41 entries
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This is dark and filled with a lot of emotion and sorrow. I think many people can relate to this. Nice use of the words as well. Thanks for entering and good luck. ~
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Just remind me to stay out of your way when you have the grumps on..... lol.
I say WOW, very intense and written well from the [insanity of the] suicidal mind's point of view.
I think sometimes that the line between sane and insane can be thin. and it has a low tolerance to weight and strain. You made my mind think on a different level, which is great. Well done.
Jeffro -
Excellent
This is a excellent write you are so very talented you write from the depths of your soul. -
this was a well written poem..i like the begining and the ending fits the poem perfectly..your a great author and your words are powerful good luck in our contest
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Wow, sis, this was great! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Cassie
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Great write..I enjoyed reading this and can relate to this poem..your words were storng and powerful and you did a great job at desrbiing the hoplesness and pain that ones feels when going through a suicidal state..keep writting your great at it! Thanks for entering our contest and good luck
~Chrissy~
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