How the pain hurts deep,
From a love once embraced,
Now to only make you weep,
Wishing...to be erased.
Love is a game without rules,
And we have absolutely no control.
We fall hard like oblivious fools
Wishing again, to become whole.
A love that has ended,
Must now be let go,
For your heart must be mended
And no longer be woe.
One thing I must tell you,
Is to keep walking forward.
To start life anew,
and don't be deterred.
That part of your life,
Has now been sealed,
As though cut with a knife
And a new you revealed.
You may now feel weak,
But as time does go by,
A new love interest will peek
And old wounds will whisper "bye-bye."
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This is such a sweet write. So beautiful and inspirational. It really lifts the heart. You have a very magical gift.
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I agree with you completely. good luck.
Rose -
I'm awaiting that bye bye myself.
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This is cute! Great advice here to every one who has suffered from a broken heart. Moving ahead in your life is the only thing that can save you. Dwelling on a lost love that doesn't want anything to do with you anymore can be very time consuming and cause even more heart ache.
Jeremy0826 -
I can relate with this pooem very well. I had my first love do this. It sucks and hurts like hell but just as you said you will go on.
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this is great poem...
"Love is a game without any rules,
And we have absolutely no control.
We fall hard like oblivious fools
Wishing again, to become whole."
that's true... absolutely true.
great write, thanks for entering the contest.. good luck
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