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What absolutely wonderful feet

What absolutely wonderful feet

God, your beautiful feet
are tender and fair
clear toes, hennaed sweet
pretty like two pears.

Oh daughter of Adam
who plays inside dirt
loving every single hand
of friends within skirts.

Feet carry this mother
of Muslims who prays
moist beneath socks smothered
always ready to play.

Splashing inside a tub
pushing the bubbles away
and loving a rub
ahh feelng so gay.

Feet like your mom's
who bequeathed their form
running in park's from
after shoes are shorn.

Doing your momma's toes
listening to her advice
because your momma knows
when to apply ice.

Your soft, kind nature
is plainly right there
seven plus inches sure
and beautiful from care.

Sometimes with your daughter
you make toes up
thereby the ugliness slaughter
wiping away skin corrupt.

Mines are twice long
dwarfing yours in size
nothing about them wrong
not a single surprise.

Ten perfect little toes
upon a beautiful heel
ticklish like you know
laughing as you feel.

Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

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Dear friends

I dream of toes so perfect in the form and in them the shoes were shorn very seldom worn.

Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

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  • SoulWhispher
    February 12, 2007
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    Magic words written

    A tale of magic and tender love weaved in a poetic verse, great work, John


  • JohnnyD gold member
    February 12, 2007

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    women's pretty, soft feet are usually very hard to beat. Especially when they peek out under the covers with curling toes pointing toward heaven. I, of course, know nothing of such things, but I do hear whispered rumors exhausting from beneath satin sheets. Truth of that is not totally know but after the disaster at brunch yesterday my recent pledge of never chasing single women was forged in fire.

    JD


  • Quiet places gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Charming

    Never thought of a write about toes. Made a cool poem though. Liked the content with such delicate imagery. Gives a new meaning to mothers and daughters too. Great poem, Don


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 11, 2007

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    Feeling you...

    Tickle me feet as
    you tickle my soul
    Hear my laugh as
    it's my heart's music.

    I have got to have the SILLIEST grin on my face right now... you are so special... writing a poem about thoughts of my feet You are so insanely romantic Aba... and I am so blessed to have you!

    Yours eternal...
    Sahabah


    • Abdul T Alishtari
      February 11, 2007

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      Laughing

      Peace

      Most toes seek freedom
      against their oppressive shoes
      happy with some aplomb
      always paying heavy dues.

      Peace

      Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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