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Thinking...

My baby sleeps
While I lie awake
Thinking of al the things
that could lead to mistakes
Thinking of all the things
I could and couldn't do
Thinking of all things lost
and all things come round, anew

Thinking of all the things
I once had, but now have lost.
Thinking of perfection:
A dragons tale expressed.

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  • aurora frog
    February 11, 2007
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    Thankyou. and please dont ask me to explain that.


  • Janetheplain
    February 11, 2007
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    sad

    This one was sad for me! Thinking of all the mistakes I have done, what I could have done better. I try not to regret anything, cause it was a learning experience for me. Try to think the same way. And the future is a scary thing for everybody cause who knows what will happen? Anyway well done!! Jane