how do you love him? go on, count the ways:
do you love him for his comely grace or pleasing face?-
if so, banish these follies from your mind-
for physical attraction is only momentary, you will find.
do you love him for his light hearted humor or clever jests?
please consider this- maybe this "love" is no love- but friend,
a platonic "romance" you must end.
do you love him for his words, sincere and profound?
words a are but a flitting utterance, passing, blowing in the breeze-
and once uttered they may lose their meaningless perfection, and you'll be left waiting your whole life, longing to be appeased.
friend, why do you feel such undeniable, unstoppable, Uncontrollable affection for him? what is it that makes it impossible for you to close the gateway to your heart in his face?
find this and you shall find the comfort to your troubled, forfeited days-
you will no longer lay awake wondering, counting the ways.
A contest entry
- Advice.. Advice.. Advice by Perplexed in Love.
575 points, ended February 25, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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I like this. It explains like the exact same feelings I have for this guy I know, but hes not around much anymore so.... *sigh* but good work.
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dont panic, as eistein once said; everything should be made as simple as possible, but no simpler. i have made 26 comments, i have been commented on 8 times. -
really awesome, loved the rhyming, and it seemed to get better and better.
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ooooooooooo... I love this very nice rhyme ^_^
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OMG.. this is freaking awesome. I like the way it rhymes.
"friend, why do you feel such undeniable, unstoppable, Uncontrollable affection for him? what is it that makes it impossible for you to close the gateway to your heart in his face?"
I don't know how to answer this question, I think it is that he has something that I want in a guy..
thanks for your advice and for entering the contest..
Goodluck..
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