In such a rough weather where would I end?
The destination is too far away,unreachable
Maybe a launch might bring sucess to my journey
Maybe I'm too selfish to accomplish my dreams
To acheive sucess is what everyone wants
But this life is too unsure...So I risk
myself just to travel as roads changes
When paths change I still go on with my journey
Someday I might reach my own destination
Author notes
My view point on life..
Please tell me what you think
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hey there...u have compressed the entire meanin of life and its challenges in a very appreciable piece out here...everyone feels the same and is in quest of success..but the best thing is to live in present fully n one day ur destination(success) will touch ur feet...well done..tc
PARTH....
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Hi my lovely Mariam
After all those time of being away from AP, I have a chance of reading your works again and yes, like always you penned such an incredible job! Be well in your journey of life.
Thank you for sharing this meaningful poem with us
~Massy~
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Very True
Yeah its true as some intelligent person says: "Life is a foreign language and very few people understand it."
Very true, at times life takes so much turns that it becomes difficult to find the way to destination. But the one who continues in a direction will get the goal.
"One thing is sure about a way, it will end at a destination."
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no words to tell how gud it is...!!
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Good work !!!
Dear Marium, now this was a good reflective poem by you. No doubt, life is full of uncertainities, we never know what might happen the very next moment. At times, we do become fearful of the fact that perhaps our dreams and aspirations will never come alive. I liked and agreed with the beautiful close of your poem......No matter how many doubts sting our mind we should never let fears overcome us.... Just believe in God, believe in the magnificent potentialities He has hidden inside you and keep marching on and on....Whether the destination is accomplished or not, the journey itself is rewarding for hard work and strong determination never gets wasted. May Allah make us tread the right path and guide us to our destination ! Ameen.
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