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A Loner Makes Sense

 

The curtain drapes sway next to my cheek,
those sunrays pierce through my lone smile,
the room looks gilded and I sit with a book…
if it doesn’t come bursting out of you,
let it be love, hate, contempt, or inspiration,
there’s nothing true to be explored here…

Many a times universal statements,
and contemplations of the lonely heart
in Bukowski’s words to read
in between the lines –
it’s life!

Straightforward he talks to me,
talks to all through a language,
as he struggles to tie me with it
there’s a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I’m too tough for him


With my coffee mug and a pencil,
as I read his lines and start…
the journey is bursting out of the tunnel,
with passerby windows lit,
on trembling tracks to infinity…

As his tough words pull and tug
at the curtains, secrets are revealed –
the wildness and the harshness,
it’s life…
it’s a challenge to the dark!

Author notes

image courtesy: http://www.fiamengo.com/bsg/bukowski.gif
Bukowski's page: http://oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Charles_Bukowski

So you want to be a writer: http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/43542-Charles-Bukowski-So-You-Want-To-Be-A-Writer

Bluebird: http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/10649-Charles-Bukowski-Bluebird

A Challenge To The Dark: http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/10621-Charles-Bukowski-A-Challenge-To-The-Dark 

 

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  • Ronald Wiseman gold member
    February 25, 2007

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    A well deserved trophy

    You got through the hardv shell to the centrality of the poet and applied it literally to your own life and philosophy.


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      February 26, 2007
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      I am SO SO SO happy to hear from you. I miss you. Thanks a lot for the encouraging comment. Love ya. Sam


  • Old Poetry gold member
    February 18, 2007
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    You have done exactly as asked and told me who your favourite is and why.
    You have touched upon a number of his skills in the same straightforward manner he would have done.
    You have also provided references for others to read and enjoy your hero.
    For each of these, well done


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      February 20, 2007
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      Thanks a lot for the comment and the trophy.. I am glad you foudn the poem appropriate, and interesting. Thanks a lot. Love. Sam.


  • Lady Altheia
    February 11, 2007

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    This is well written but you lost me on the content and meaning. I am afraid it went over my head. Good luck in the contest.


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      February 11, 2007
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      Well I know not how the content could miss your thought. For if you read Bukowski you may understand what I attempt to portray. Thanks a lot for the comment and wishes. Love. Sam


  • Von Powell gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Word perfect Sam - a beautifully written portrayal to the man and his poetry.
    Well done on a wonderful entry.
    Von


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      February 11, 2007
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      Thanks a lot. Your comment is something I'll always look forward too. Thanks for the comment and the wishes. His poems' raw quality grasps a reader.. well. love. sam.


  • Aowena
    February 11, 2007
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    Good work!

    I love bluebird! Nice choice.

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