I speak in words, but sometimes...
Words never need to be said.
I am but an inch away from your face,
And I can hear your thoughts.
I can read your eyes.
I can smell your skin.
Wait! Don't kiss me just yet,
I want to stay just right here.
Please, don't move,
Don't even blink once.
I know you can understand me,
Even though I am not speaking.
We are lost in a stare,
That only you and I can share.
Please, don't move!
I want to stay like this forever.
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A contest entry
- *girls only contest*your most memorable moment with a guy by meggyjillz.
390 points, ended February 20, 2007, 18 entries
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This is absolutely beautiful. The love in this is so magical. It makes me miss my boyfriend even more. Beautiful write.
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Do think your author page is great. Enjoyed reading this poem too - don't think one could stay in this position too long, that wanting to kiss is just too much of a magnet and lips would touch in no time. LOL
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lol-most def!!! It's in that anticipation of this kiss, that drives us ladies wild, yeah?
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awww how many times i've felt this exact same way! this is so bitter sweet, reminds me of failed and passed relationships! great job! and keep up the great work!
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Aww...this was cute. When I say cute I don't mean frivolous and shallow and silly, I mean it's a simply real write about something beautiful. This kind of basic intimacy is amazing and you wrote it out so well. It gave me warm fuzzys. Thanks for the read and great job.
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Yeah!
lol-"warm fuzzys." I loved that!
It's all about capturing a moment; a moment frozen into a poem, and for oneself in memory
thanks,
*R
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I love it. So simple yet full of emotion. I love it when you can sit in complete silence and just stare into the eyes of the one you want to be with.
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Thanks, Blue!
Truly is such an intense feeling, to be able to do this, isn't it?!
To be honest, I really didn't think I was going to get such great reactions. I'm glad that I wrote it, because it seems so many have been able to connect and relate with it.
Hope to see you around, again!
*R
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Great Work!
This is very beautiful! Sometimes the best part of a relationship is just being there. Most times couples never take the time to just look into each other's eyes and see the love that shines so brightly. Just being alone with one another can be very relaxing and often times very reassuring in a relationship. Sometimes you say it all, when you say nothing at all. Great work my friend and keep it up! Thanks for sharing this!
Jeremy0826 -
That was very beautiful with deep love. Love how I could almost imagine you standing there with a deep stare in you eyes looking back at him. Great. (Lisa)
"I know you can understand me,
Even though I am not speaking.
We are lost in a stare,
That only you and I can share.
Please, don't move!
I want to stay like this forever"
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I LOVE THIS PIECE!!!!!! It is sooooo beautiful and romatic. You descripted it perfectly, I could pic two people the entire time just staring into each others eyes. The emotion song from the page. Amazing job and keep writing.
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Oh this is just great. You put into words very sweet emotions.
Your poem reads very easily. I really like it.
Thanks.
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Impressive
Such a wonderful poem. I felt as if I was in that moment. I love the idea of conveying so much without speaking. Sometimes you wish you could just freeze time and feel that way forever. I thought the poem flowed together well.
. Rewarded 4
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Awwie this is a cute poem..I like it alot..I really enjoyed reading this.great job..keep writing you got great talant..Heather xx
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