i am so in love with you,
i can never take my eyes off of you,
your beautiful eyes,
your smooth skin,
knowing that I'll never be with you,
kills me inside,
but remember that i will love you until the end of time,
when the day comes for us to meet again,
i will give you my gift,
cause my gift is my soul,
and its for you,
i want you to tell everybody,
that i will love you until the end of time
A contest entry
- contest;; by i n sa t i ab l e.
900 points, ended February 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice
a message of an ever-lasting love though not felt by the other...
Well done!!
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This shows such emotion. It shows we have so much we want to say but can't put into words. Amazing write
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Great i wish that i could tell someone that but all i can tell them now is that i hate them.
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Bravo
Nicly said and well put into perspective,,To love someone who don't love you back is like chasing after a fairy tale that bleeds... Love the pic... you well earned these three cheers....
your welcome,,,dragontuba
If you have time please,, you are more than welcome to comment on my poems..Life and Death, Life and Death
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great imagery, it`s very nice to have such strong feelings about someone. thanks for entering! ♥ in s a t ia b le
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