I sustain this urgency
Requiring revolt
To underestimating
The outcome of your love
I contemplate the existance of your being
And I should of noticed
Alone more often
You were secluding me
With fears to my future
Time erupts again
And the only thing
Keeping me warm these days
Is the red shawl you gave to me
On the same day
That you had left her
In the same position
As me
In a list
A contest entry
- Take Your Pic by piccola.
600 points, ended February 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad
I felt empty and alone after i read this. Doh! Men who'd av em?. x Good luck.
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I really like that you used the red shawl in your poem. Some of the other poems seem to just be entered from other contests and though I said pre-writes could be used, .... well anyway, I like that yours was fresh and new. thank you.
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