Eighteen years of making sense
Trying to find self-confidence
Riddled me through all these years
Dwelling deep within my fears
Wishing thoughts back already said
Wishing deeds done to be dead
Things inside that venture out
Living life forever in doubt
Hope to hear some words from you
Though I know you never knew
I'd like to think your here somehow
Right inside you'll stay for now
Feelings that I want to share
Wondering why? you shouldn't care
My heart has drowned and though it sank
I felt nothing more, my mind is Blank.
L.MacNevin
Dec 22,1998
Author notes
This poem was written while I was in a relationship that was new. I had given up hope that it would change and this was the result of those feelings. Again like my other poems was written about five years ago.
Written December 22nd, 1998
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good
I like your style -
i really enjoyed your poem and you were right it kinda does sound like my poem..
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wow, simply amazing
you're an awesome writer
i love how i can relate
and i'm here to talk to too
~Lissie -
this is awesome. so simple and the flow was really good. the last line was perfect.
Matt -
somethings just never will be and the pages are blank even when the writing is being done... sad peice yes, but it speaks of what made you
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Aww such a sad piece but it was lovely!
Hope all is well soon
Well done xxx -
Your sadness is my sadness too...
Theese words have charned my heart...
But don't be blue...But dont be blue...
There is some light in every dark...
sajonara
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