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For My Valentines, For My Valentine

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For My Valentines


words can not describe
all the love I have for you
so, no words, just hugs





For My Valentine


i solved the riddle
your imperfect love for me
is perfect for me



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A contest entry

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  • myrataal silver member
    February 14, 2007

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    To the most perfect Valentine of All

    I hope you enjoyed his poemy even though your love is imperfect. HUGZZZZZ to you both.

    And for you, beloved All of Love, I give a warm and sincere kiss:

    Thank you for being OUR Valentine, too.

    Myra

  • Lullabyhaven
    February 13, 2007
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    Big Things...

    Come in small packages! Perfect example found here.


  • Amber Danielle
    February 13, 2007

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    You said more than a hefty share, but have done so with minimal filler words. I love how you turned a poem into an embrace of words. It's beautiful.


    • Allan Emery gold member
      February 13, 2007
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      Happy Valentines Day to you, Amber! You get an extra rose for kicking ass!

  • Gaia gold member
    February 13, 2007

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    thank you for entering my contest

    Fleur de Rosa

  • semperfimom39 gold member
    February 13, 2007
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    Excellent !!

    What a beautiful way to show your love! This is such a beautiful valentine's day gift !


  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    February 13, 2007
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    Now this is a Valentine that I like. Great Job!

  • Amera gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Well girls… it looks like we all got the same Valentine. I want the piece with the nuts.

    Amera

    • Allan Emery gold member
      February 11, 2007
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      Really? Who ever said this is all there will be? Maybe this is just foreplay. I am a complex man, a thoughtful writer, and a cunning linguist. Did you want the peanut or cashew turtle?

  • a woman to love
    February 11, 2007
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    pretty


  • Goddess of illusion
    February 11, 2007

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    Amazing...

    I can just Applaud...

    Elm


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Very nice! I love Haiku when they are done so well. It is amazing how much one can say in so few words. They are both beautiful.
    What a sweet Valentine.


  • Amera gold member
    February 11, 2007
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    Nice!

    Wow! A double Haiku… The first one is lovely the second one is exceptional. It’s amazing how much imagery you got out of seventeen syllables. Your Valentine just has to love this and you. This work deserves a hearty Japanese bow. Amera


  • honey bear
    February 11, 2007

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    awww .. give us a hug
    good luck in the contest with this lovely sweet write, i sure hope you get your valentine


    • Allan Emery gold member
      February 11, 2007

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      I hope I do too, though you realize you are the only one I call Honey! Happy Valentine's Day, Honey!
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