you tried e v e r y t h i n g
just to make it all go.away
&& you doodled ♥s on your exercise books
scratched Xs onto tables
wrote those three words anywhere you.could
[LoveLoveLove]
but nothing you do can fix
ton coeur.cassé.
Author notes
Um. Hope it's foreign enough for you?
A contest entry
- Complejo. Dos-- 24 Hour Contest by marrow.
300 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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RAWR.
loveloveLOVE this hun!
As short as this is, it might just be my favorite by you.
Great job doll iloveyouu♥
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Gladyarr liked it, sweets. LoveJoo.
Noise&&Kisses
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i am in love with this.
&& i am in love with you.
marry me? -
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YesYesYes[++Yes] Sweets
ILoveYouLoveYouLoveYou
Noise&&Kisses
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love the french.
thank you for your entery, again. i loved the image of the mark in the table, and the doodling. thank you for this.
best of luck to you in judging.
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Thank you for the comment.. I *will* win one of your contests one day!!
[Or I'll pretend to be someone else when they win.. depends how desperate I get.]
Noise&&Kisses
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the heart broke, isnt that in french?
but nothing you do can fix
ton coeur.cassé.
awwuh, hunny i loved it. =] it was way cute. i love french (im in french 3) so this was refreshing to read. very unique & lovelovelovely piece. =] way to go!
hehe
ilyily ♥
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Glad you liked it sweets.
Noise&&Kisses
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I'm guessing "ton coeur cassé" means your broken heart? I could be wrong (probably am ) but it would work well as that so I'll just stick with that. French can be so pretty. This is simple and to the point, no need for elaborations. One of those poems that is written on a napkin and floats through your school's lunchroom for weeks
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Yeah, ton coeur cassé is your broken heart. French is pretty, but all the grammar is a nightmare to learn. Thankyarr lotsly.
Noise&&Kisses
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