Down by the meadows there's a secret vale~
my place to dream & escape reality.
Inhaling life's sweet scent I float towards heaven~
the luscious grass reinforces nature's gleam.
Author notes
A contest entry
- 10 Lines - Free Verse- Amaze Me by Cupcrazy.
400 points, ended February 11, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your happy place. by samantha jean.
800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love nature poems where I can feel and see and smell and enhance all my senses with the words written. Your piece is such a poem, this is very well done. Thanks for entering.
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Can I print this out and hang it in my office. It is beautiful and uplifting. I truly love this. well done my friend.
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Lovely!
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This is amazing for sure...could imagine me on a lazy afternoon in my hometown with some "grass" in my mouth...take it the way you want...I KNOW what I mean...lol..sorry, got caught up in the moment...daydreaming...great job! Good luck!
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I like the way this makes me feel and I understand how it can have different meaning... Nicely done!
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A lovely tranquil write hon, it reminded me of the bottom of my garden, excellent images there, roll on summer!
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Loved it.
Again Bunny
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This is a wonderful piece, I enjoyed it very much and it didn't have to be ten as long as it wasn't over ten Bunny
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is it just my counting or is there not ten lines here ha ha great write here though my firend good luck in the contest (i presume it says ten lines or LESS?) 
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Great Eight Lines!!!!!!!!!
Hello, This was a pleasure to read this morning. Very tranquil imagery you have written. A beautiful place to drift off to when things in life get too hectic. Thank you for sharing this very lovely poem. Best of luck in the contest my friend. Take care, Sandy
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