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The Smile

The moon full at sky
The fireflies over the lake
I saw my love smile

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  • Silenced Tears
    August 14, 2007
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    And wow. Even a haiku poem is as beautiful as this... Thank you so much for writing these poems


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 11, 2007

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    Very beautiful haiku you have written here.
    An enjoyable read and thank you for sharing
    this here!


    Jeremy0826


  • lemonhead
    February 11, 2007
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    I love how tyou discribed your loves's smile


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    I don't know much about Haikus but I did like this it was refreshing. A good write short but sweet thank yo for sharing

  • piccola silver member
    February 11, 2007

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    someone told me the first line of a haiku should also be the title. That makes it a bit more difficult and I don't know if it's necessary or not. This is beautiful.


  • Raelin
    February 11, 2007

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    So much said in so few words. Emotion is expressed well. Well done. keep them coming and blessed be.

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