Please let me go….
Please let me sleep….
Please let me love you in peace….
I know you love me but I don’t think you get it…
I know you love me in two different ways but I don’t think you get it…
I know you hate my grin but I don’t think you get it….
My love for you has changed and hasn’t gotten less….
I have always loved you in one way….
That grin that tells all is my way of showing that I love being around you…
Please tell me….
Please say it once….
Please I’m begging….
You don’t know how you feel about all this…
You don’t know how to act or what to say…
You don’t know whether you love me as a sister or a lover…
I know it maybe a little weird but I know I like how it feels….
I don’t know whether or not I should hug you even after everything…
I have always and will always love you as a lover….
Please don’t say that!!!
Please don’t do this to me!!
Please tell me the reason for this!!
You do this then tell me not to be mad…
You break me like everyone else has…
You are too good to be true….
I didn’t think anyone could be mad after that…
I didn’t think you could hurt me like this….
You are to good for me and I should of known from the start….
Author notes
This shows that even people you love can hurt you....in the space of lik 1-2 weeks...thats all it took....
Please tell me what you think
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wowo very emonional i lovedd it
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wow
verry sad im sorry. good poem.
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Awww... I am sending you a hug!
Sigh. You have written a very true and sincere poem, which is the very thing I love so much about your poetry! 
A poem that stirs my heart and makes me want to send you some extra love today!
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Powerful
This is a really beautiful write. I really like it. How you are going into two stages of this persons emotions. asking questions then responding to the feelings after what happened. And yes the ones that you love actually are the ones that can hurt you the most, they do leave the deepest scars. Good peice of work here, powerful, and veautiful in its own way.
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good right
i dont kno whether this is a reply to my sadness poem or not but if so i love u and if not i still love you cause you are an amazing person like everyone else has said an im an idiot for writing the poem i did its just how i feel sometimes knowing that i cant be wit u
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amazing sad poem
and u know.. one of the hardest things is getting hurt by the people u love n care about the most
i hate to know that u been hurt.. ur such an amazing person.. i really hope things will get better
cz nothing is worth getting all depressed bout, and specially not girls, heh! ask me!
of course u gna feel down n all but babe dt let that take over u...
again... amazing poem
luv u loads!
kisses!
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Nice sharring of feelings. I could relate well. One person in my biological family up in Alaska, hurt me really bad. It didn't take too long. Within two months. I'm adopted and I always thought that my real family would be better at not hurting me. Not so. Great Job with your poem. Keep up the good work.
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