Many things we cut in a lifetime.
We cut an apple, to taste its sweetness.
We cut a cake, to celebrate a moment.
We cut the tension, with an odd placed joke.
We cut out pain, with useless distractions.
We cut out the people, who do us pain.
But worst of all...I have cut myself.
I have bled warm redness, which has left many scars.
And although I feel ashamed,
I feel remorse for that past.
The scars put upon me, are my sad friends,
That remind me daily, where I have come,
Where I will go, and where I will stay away from.
So no matter how deep the cut, inside and out,
I know one day...the healing will come.
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I have been there and let the blade break my flesh and watch the blood flow, feel the pain...I know how you feel and what kind of bottom point you get to, to be in that state of mind...I am your new friend and I am here, if you ever need to talk, OK???
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wow, this one's soooo old!
thanks for reading it though! and for extending out for help 
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This is very well written. It really touches my heart. I feel your pain and sadness.
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this was really good, I like how you started it. specially the cake one, my friend was reading it also, and she said that she would have jsut put to eat the sweet cake, but then I jsut told her, thats not very good, you sound like a fatass then. sorry for the language. but your poem. WOW! I love it. it is really good. and the very last lines:
"So no matter how deep the cut, inside and out,
I know one day...the healing will come."
That is really good. cause it's not always forever, even if it feels like forever cutting. hurting, dieing on the inside. the healing will come. and it might take awhile, but, in the end, it will come. I love your poem. keep writeing cause you are very good. thank you for entering the contest.
Felix BlackHeart
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Time heals all wounds
I really like your poem. I could identify, with the emotions in this particular poem. Well done. Maybe you could take a look at my poem "We're still okay -right?", let me know what you think.
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Oh, strong write. I like how you kept the wording simple at first then moved it to cutting ones self. This is a really nice write. Though it's a sad subject, it still is a real nice write. Keep up the good work.
Love always,
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wow this is a awesome piece of writing, you have a lot of talent. I like the different perspective you have approached your past.
keep on writing
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