Luscious lips licking, what will satisfy?
Undulating hips and heavenly sips
Scents fill the heady air with promiscuous intent
Concubines fill your time but are you ready for something new
I know you, I feel your desire, lasciviousness inspires
Our time will create a new path on the lovemaking trail
Until all will know our honeyed names sticking upon their tongues
Suns will rise and fall and the ripeness of our passion will remain.
Author notes
What do expect with luscious as the prompt? I really tried to go for the fruit option but it lead me to the same place...sorry, if it's not what you're looking for bunny.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines - Free Verse- Amaze Me by Cupcrazy.
400 points, ended February 11, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I enjoyed this piece very much, brought some wonderful images to mind. thank you for this fine entry
Bunny
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Fantastic.
Very much enjoyed it, doll. I'm to become totally enamored and obsessed with these lines, I'm sure:
"Until all will know our honeyed names sticking upon their tongues
Suns will rise and fall and the ripeness of our passion will remain."
I love those... Yes. It's just so true and beautiful at the same time. Great job.
-Allura
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thanks - those are good lines if I do say so myself...ha! I'm trying very hard to get into the valentines' frame of mind. Moments I can get there but others, bla-eck!
Ah, well...
Take care sweets. -
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Sure babe. I know where you are... Keep your head up.
Much love, doll.
Allura
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It is exactly what I am looking for, I wanted you to take it wherever you mind wanted to go. but you forgot to put use the word in the piece, or did I miss it? Bunny
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Psst... it's an acrostic...
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