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f(alling)

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lo(ve) l a u g h
s(ing) d a n c e

you have stolen my heart
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i am in awe of your words
     

Author notes

Well, I love e.e. cummings. Inspirational and brilliant.
http://plagiarist.com/poetry/241/
http://www.geocities.com/soho/8454/174.htm

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  • TheStupidLamb
    January 12, 2008
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    awesome.


  • Aowena
    February 18, 2007
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    Thanks so much! This one was fun to write and a great idea for a contest.


  • Old Poetry gold member
    February 18, 2007
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    Even the title screams out the tribute to cummings.
    He is of course a worthy writer and you have managed to capture some of his style in your tribute piece although I felt it was more f(lowing) than f(alling). Well done.


  • rufina caraid gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    http://oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/e_e_cummings

    I had to add the link for e e  cummings on Oldpoetry too - couldn't help myself.


  • rufina caraid gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Your poem leaves me in no doubt at all to whom you pay tribute.
    cummings is the only poet I know who makes me turn my head at various angles to read his work - you had the same effect. lol
    Von

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