i lay in bed
with tears in my eyes
thinking of how my live use to be
i had learned how to
laugh
smile
love and live
i can't seem to do that no more
o just lay in bed crying
all the time
why do i live?
is all i ask now
everything is gone from me
i am just a corpsethat just lays there
thinking i am still alive
no one can see
or hear me
because i am dead to the world
and dead to me
Please tell me what you think
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*Speechless*
I have no idea of how I ended up here, but...
wow
I relate to this poem in many ways.
Thank you for writing it. You are gifted. -
BRAVO!
It was so sad. The words were so powerful and you made this poem work.
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*CLAP*
It pains me to see such feelings in other people as i feel right now.. great write.
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Great poem. I can relate a lot to it. I'm here if you ever need to talk!
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That was sad .i wanted to cry
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good write deep and powerful
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that was sad... in a good way... and what i just said really din't make any sence... did it? well anyway... i like it. good job.
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You've taugh many thing, that brought me back to life, now it's my turn to do you this favor
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