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Alone

Alone
in a crowd
no one knows my name.

Alone
when with one
I'm not quite the same.

Alone
in the world
veiled to anyone.

Alone
in my mind
lost, with help from none.

Alone
very small
the universe sown.

Alone
so alone

one, always alone.

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  • Summer Dawn
    February 16, 2007
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    nice write

    sometimes it is best to write in times like these. i like this form so much. nicely written. here if ever u need.

                               


    • Golden Dreams
      February 16, 2007
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      Thanks Dawn!

      I really appreciate your comment. I just changed the poem by a few words, to balance better, but it's still the same content. I really feel like this many times, and I just wrote what I felt one night. Thanks for the applause too!


  • February 11, 2007
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    Loved it.

    I really like this poem. Struck a personal nerve in me. I definetely can relate and I like that. You made it short and simple, but at the same time, put so much into it. Overall great write, keep it up.

    My favorite verse?
    "Alone
    in my mind
    help from none."

    ...Amazing.


    • Golden Dreams
      February 11, 2007
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      Thank you, Krystelize.

      I truly appreciate your comment. Some feelings are just so hard to put into words.