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Painful Notes and Memories

Notes in a bag
Each one by you
The love you showed me
Never followed through
You held me tight
I never let go
But some how you managed to let me go
You broke my heart
You left me alone
You moved away
And never wrote
I felt ashamed like I did something wrong
But in the inside
You were scared to move on
I fell for you and  you lead me on
Still till this day I wish you wernt gone
My heart was broken
and incomplete until the stage day
when I found someone elses misery
Taking the pain you left me
Pushing it aside
To open up and leave you behind
Giving a hand
Is what I planned
Instead I found a really good friend
Getting so close way to fast…
I moved on and had a blast.
I found a new lover that
Is nothing like you but  she still  knows
I miss you so
You took my heart you throwed it away
You left me alone
In a lot of pain
I cried for days maybe night
You turned me down
And went out of town
You wrote me a note
That said You couldn’t follow through
But in the end I will always Love You.

Notes in a bag
Each one from you
The love you showed me
Never followed through

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  • perfect relief
    February 16, 2007
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    Unfortunately I know this feeling as well, and it's not too fun. You've written about it beautifully though. I like the way that you allude to the title with the whole "notes in a bag" line too. Good luck in the contest and thank you for entering.


  • DeadOnArival
    February 11, 2007

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    well said...
    i've been there...
    found that its better to remember...
    but let go...
    loved it...
    kudoz