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[ Death in determination ]

Death in determination
Angels that are demons
Sorrow and greif
Death within thee

Kiss of death
Poisin on your lips
A Romeo & Juilet story
Only there was no love
Peircing screams
Ring out in the darkness

Angels burning
Demons laughing
Cheer in the black air
Death in the valley lair

Scream to the dark angels
Listen to the shill screams
Your own screams
Fall in tune

Deep crimson pours down
Don't stop running
This is a new hell
Let them die
Burn in the acid
Washing them away

Turn and run
Run and Scream
Scream and Die
Death and the angels sing

Lyres play
Gods cry
Angels laugh
Hades is moved
Death is better sweet

You hang from
A bloody rope
And a needle in your vain

Suicide

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  • esroddo silver member
    February 15, 2007
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    A True master piece

    Wonderfully dark I love this write. I never wrote dark till I came to AP Family. Here I have learned alot. (Lisa)
    "Deep crimson pours down
    Don't stop running
    This is a new hell
    Let them die
    Burn in the acid
    Washing them away"


  • February 11, 2007
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    I liked it.

    Very interesting write. Dark and edgy. I liked the style, it definetely caught my attention.