First I admired you
and the way you jumped
then I fell for your eyes
you voice
being with you wasn't enough
before I knew what was happening
I was in love
we were living together
bestfriends forever
everything I could ever dream of
was coming true
I couldn't believe my luck
I'm so in love with you
you always bail me out
when situations get tough
I wish I could tell you my true identity
but I want to stay by your side
i wish you could see me as a girl
as the girl that I am
but I'll continue living as a guy
so I can stay by your side
until the day I can reveal who I am
and how I feel
I can't believe I never realized
how you felt for me
others saw it
but somehow I couldn't see
I can't believe that all this time
you've been in love with me
my dream has now become reality
as I admit how I feel
I wonder if this is real
did we accidently fall in love
or was it destiny
Author notes
Other "PIE" this is about Hana Kimi its from mizuki's point of view it kinda sucks tho
A contest entry
- Anime/Manga Fans Welcome! by Angel Lunarious.
390 points, ended February 23, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OMG.. this poem is freaking awesome... i love hana kimi..!!!
i love everything about it, it express a lot about mizuki.. maybe u could also write from sano's point of view, u know just for the fun of it..
LOVE THIS POEM..!! ur awesome
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I like this poem a lot! The title kinda "popped" out at me! lol! This is a awesome write!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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