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numbness

I've lost all faith in parents.
I've lost all faith in friends.
There isn't anyone to turn to.
Tell me what love is again?

I don't have any feeling.
All I can do is write.
Nothing can sum up all the pain
That I feel this fateful night.

I've killed all my emotions
To keep away from you.
It helps me cope with all the hurt
To know that my life's not through.

I put up with all the sadness.
I tolerate the hate.
If I only had one wish
It would be to find a mate.

The music has died once again.
As I sit here and close my eyes
A lonely tear runs down my face
To hide my ugly disguise.

I wish that I could tell you.
Is that too much to ask?
I wish that I could get a hug
  One that I hope would last.

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DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE SAMANTHA PINGREE

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  • Live with a passion
    September 16, 2007

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    wow. That was awesome! It made me...not happy but in a good way, b/c it was supposed too. Good job, I'd give you a hug


  • Random Thoughts
    March 1, 2007

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    Aw I was loving this poem so much it was awesome,everything about it was what I wanted.

    Except that it has won a gold trophy.
    And no wonder aswell it is truly a worthy write.
    I am so sorry but I can not make exceptions as the rules state this is a contest for those who have not won a trophy.

    Please look out for my next contest as I loved your writing style and ability to let us have it with both barrells blazing,

    Brenden


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    February 16, 2007

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    Thank you for sharing this poem with me. It's so sad and beautiful. Thanks for entering and good luck!