red light in grave door
fuschia strobes blinking purple
waves streak dirty half-way down
and the world flies dangling
orange pillow in my weirding eyes
Author notes
we'll see where this gets us(being Chibi4Christ and Jewel4Him)
A contest entry
- 25 words - 10 minutes - 7 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended February 10, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow... people actually like it! i guess you were right!
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I'm crying on the computer again!!
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hahahaha!!
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Brilliant piece my friend! loved the form and flow and the rhythm and rhyme are dead on. Captivating piece from start to finish. Don't put down that pen! I love this so much. Keep up the killer work, take care and good luck.
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some hard images in this. nicely done.
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We are cracking up so badly it is hard to type and we fear the computer will shortcircuit, we're crying so hard!!!
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