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Cain Toad

cain toad
so able on
the eve of destruction
at their garden introduction
please go,
a dam to camaraderie,
the locals would agree,
hop to it now,
good bye


Author notes

Butterfly Cinquain: syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2

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  • El Pescador
    February 17, 2007

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    This was judged fourth by the team of poets. It polled the most fourth place votes. It was also the the most interesting poetry form submitted and well executed. I am having problems with the site, but points and trophies will be awarded as soon as possible


    • azure85 gold member
      February 17, 2007
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      Thank you for an interesting contest, this was a fun one to write for!