"It isn't my fault that I like her
At least I have a clue
And I maybesortakindadefinitely know
She likes me too!
Unlike the Kibble King
And the adorable schoolgirl
I don't hide MY feelings
I actually let them go.
I can be... Sensitive,
And... Sweet...
But
HONESTLY,I swear!
I really do care!
The HAND always did it!
I was just
(Unfortunately)
RIGHT THERE!!!"
***SLAP***
"... Ouch."
A contest entry
- Anime/Manga Fans Welcome! by Angel Lunarious.
390 points, ended February 23, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I think...
you just made me want to start watching Anime...
lol....
this was actually extrememly humorous....
xo
Heidi -
Great Job!
This was funny and you hit the right notes with Miroku. Keep penning!
. I used up most of my applause ealier. But this was very good!
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LOL cute poem, I , too, adore the 'word' you generated in here, lmao. Very descriptive write, well done with wonderful flow!! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Peg
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LMAO...
i LOVE the 'maybesortakindadefinitely'.... it reminds me of my word: 'somethingsortakindalike' lol.
I liked this...
Sahabah -
Wow
... Ok.. the chat speak all one word flowing together makes this kind of hard to read, but other than that it is a funny little poem about liking one another.. cute.. Good luck in your contest. Kassie -
Poor Miroku. Can no one tame his ever-groping hands? The poem made me giggle and drives his character straight home.
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I like this poem! I like how you called Inuyasha a "kibble King" Thanks for entering and good luck!
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