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[despiration rant]so sad!

give me another fix
give me another high
you left me half-empty
the last time
and now all i think of
is desperation
and reconsoliation
oh denial oh denial
give me a sacrifice
give me a new tonight
sexy is not an attempt
without a witness
without a lost soul
feel this strain
the pauses between my lips
i already quit
to find i was already addicted
your blood pumping though my veins
your words circulating in my brain
inject me again
make my head fall lose
my appendages feel free
become a part of me
i need another fix
i need another high
please say you will give it another try

Author notes

i know the 7th line, there is a word mispelt..i can't figure that one out..if you can please tell me! um i wrote this actualy out of a long fight with my friend, b/c they like my x and i wanted to go out with them again...trust me you will never know who i am talking about..but yea, idk, and after listening to this amazing song someone ranted for me ^-^ i loved it...made me happy!

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Comments


  • Aroarathebloody
    March 5, 2007
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    damn

    I fucking loved this one, you got skills woman


  • Simplexcomplxity
    February 10, 2007
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    well written
    good emotional flow
    i like it


    • artisticxpoetry
      February 11, 2007
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      yay yay..oh btw sorry my message got sent to you a million times...like i said, my comp is being fucked up...i am glad you liked it ^-^