I was dying
As I laid there on the floor
Broken and defeated,
I cried.
The walls were closing in
And I didn't know what to do
I felt as if I had lost myself
And then I was found by you.
You held onto me as I broke down
Defeated, utterly defeated.
You helped me wash the feel of his hands
From my freshly tainted skin.
You were there when I had no one,
When the world turned its back on me.
You took care of me through the night
And made me forget his touch.
A bond was formed that night
As you held me while I cried.
Thank you for being there
Thank you for being the one to care.
Author notes
for the people that matter to you contest. This is dedicated to my best friend, my sister in every way except blood.
A contest entry
- contest;; by i n sa t i ab l e.
900 points, ended February 14, 2007, 10 entries
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i like this poem because it seems really relatable and has lots of real emotions that are plain and simply theer in the words, if that makes sense. thanks for entering. ♥ in s a t ia b le
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