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Rescue Me

I love thee
Shine through my tears,
And lift me from my fears.

Rescue me,
Help me cope,
Through this darkness of sorrow
through this life left from hope.

Pleading I ask you,
Take me away
Let me fly.
Cut lose these tight ropes,
The hold me in hell.

Cure me of pain
And open me to smiles.
Let me take in this heaven.

Please,
Rescue me,
I love thee
Shine through my tears,
And lift me from my fears.

All I need is your love….
Rescue me….



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  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    August 10, 2007

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    Oh wow Sweetheart,this is just so powerful and you expressed yourself great,you keep your head held up high,God Bless,Love,Hazel.


  • MadisonRae
    February 11, 2007

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    is tall dark and handsome teasing melissa? lol jk

    the message i got was simple but profound in a way that knocked the sense into you. keep it up girly

    Madison

  • emLeejo
    February 10, 2007
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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I really liked it, because like i can relate and get it! very much so... - but like idk some parts of it just made so much sense its ironic, that i read this when i did because of whats going on with my ex lol freaky stuff!! but goooooooooooooooooooooooood write! <3 Much!