Your my love,
my inspiration,
my guide
without you I know
I wouldn't have survived
Sometimes I know I don't express
how I feel
Sometimes I forget how much these
feelings are real
I just wanted you to know
because sometimes I am scared
that I don't treat you good,
and you think I don't care
you are everything to me
my light,
my hope,
you've brought out the best in me
made me feel not so alone
I know you have told me that I have
done that for you
but this is my poem that I'm writing
to you
To tell you my love
that this is true
and no matter what
I would never leave you.
Author notes
Hope is was what you are looking for. this poem is for my husband. he always thinks i am going to leave him and sometimes i feel like i dont treat him as good as i should treat him. so this is to show my love for him
A contest entry
- Pay it forward please :) by little-hug.
900 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
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awww this is so sweet! what a poem of love, i am envious, i can't write love poems to save my life! good luck in the contest...i think you will do well!
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this is...GREATLY AWESOME! i love it, i think its great and i loved reading it lol i really feel the emotion and i know how it feels, i think it was a truely great poem, great write keep up the good work
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