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Is Time On My Side?

The hugs shared
in childcare.
The filling of the heart's desire.

My pain is there
only you care.
Passion comes and goes.

Living is breathing
Everyone's seetheing
of our hearts' connection.

Now that you're going
My love is growing.
In winter's time it'll hopefully be gone.

They are not jealous anymore
of the love that was there before.
Time can only tell when the pain will subside.

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  • Ryno
    February 10, 2007

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    Great rhyme, good flow. I liked it, I thought it was an enjoyably dark mucky, piece. Thanks so much for your entry in my contest!~
    ~Ryan~