I am broken and shattered,
A portrait remains of what is left,
I am cracked and withered,
A memory remains of what is left,
I am snapped and dissolved,
A unknown fact remains of what is left,
I am split and minced,
I am weightless,
I am dull,
I am the remains of what is left.
Author notes
It is short and too the point, very unusual for me but I think if you read it two or three times you will be able to look beyond what you read.
Please tell me what you think
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I really like this. Gets the point across.
Awesome write -
This is great
No need to read more than once. Very nicely penned.
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OMG! That's really good!!!
I can relate! lol!!!
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wow i hope you know you can change the mirrors of life,,, and look in diffrent eyes
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Were you the contest holder?
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