Pain envelops my body
Undeniable grief engulfs me
My heart is tortured more so
For where is my love?
Desperation tears me to shreds
Cannot go, not yet
I crave to see his face, look in his eyes
Hold his hand, breathe the same air
Mumbled prayer escapes my lips
Gentle wind hits my face
Through swollen eyes an image appears
An angel, he is here with me
My regret hits home as I take in his smile
Time passed and lost with no hope of return
Moments now are cherished, blissful relief
I let out a sigh……..
A contest entry
- Death Bed Confessions by queenie.
1800 points, ended February 13, 2007, 15 entries
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such a sorrowful poem, well penned!
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Brilliantly emotional! I absolutely loved it and felt my heart quaking as I read.
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this is packed full of emotions.i can feel what's goin on in this as i read it.you have put yourself in this.thanks for this great entry.
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Thank you
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Ahhhh... Apple you have done a wonderful; job with this write it's so emotional expressed.Well done apple and thankyou for sharing.
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Thank you I can hardly read it back tho its brings out such feelings of loss. Boy im too soft lol
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