A summer moon,
Awash in the eternal blue
of a night
layered with the stars
burnished silver fires,
Your kiss
a taste
of summer dew
Transcended
the dark satin
of desire,
A kiss
now encased in
amber tears,
that are embedded
in my mind,
They are
a lonely relic
of our love,
that you left behind
A contest entry
- Take Your Pic by piccola.
600 points, ended February 14, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Good write
In the diary of ones life there are highs and lows yet we hang on for within the memory there is a kiss from the past
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It meets the criteria, but do you have something against line breaks? It would be more powerful and easier to read. thanks for the entry
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