The beating of an empty heart,
Beats in this chest of mine.
I cannot think, I cannot breathe,
While it is still so empty.
I've tried and tried to fill it up,
But nothing seems to work.
Its empty, and I don't know why,
Or even how to fix it.
The beating of an empty heart,
Beats in this chest of mine.
A contest entry
- Fragment, Soulful Poetry (Quick Contest) by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 10, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm, unique/original/different write. Don't sure if to like the repeated line or not, but I enjoyed them. Bravo! Thanks for entering my contest!~
~Ryan~
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