Impeccable tones
A honey-dipped
drenched thought...
Falls from lips cascades
Golden sunsets...
Melting down,
Pierced longing love
Silvering, tears languish
Life flowers,
Blooms prosper, a sea of bliss,
once enlarged
These blooms cry,
Skyward...
Soft tears
A baby's cry, hidden beauty,
Tender touches, the sensitive ear
Oh!
Ludicrous heart, unlock
Let love explode~
Author notes
Ummm again dunno about this one just ramblings lol...
Written June 16th, 2003
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i love the last line- that's a keeper. one to post above doors 'let love explode!'
so, you commented over a year ago on a piece of mine and asked me to read this piece (you posted it the day you commented on mine). i was looking through my pieces trying to find one for a friend of mine and ran across your comment. though it is highly unlikely that you'd remember the labyrinth, my sweet abyss that i took you through that day, i want to say thank ya for the sweet words. and sorry i never got back to you on that- or that it took me so long anyway. lovely piece, it was quite enjoyable! love the rambling aspect- adds a sense of humor to the piece.
fr33dom -
A sensual rose, languid lids, roaming hearts. I can see why you feel this is a fave. I loved it too.
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terse
Hardly an unessesary word. Very sensual. Background gives me migrane. -
A lovely collection of thoughs and daydreams...this one made me sigh...So much beauty...the image goes with it perfectly...I am trying to catch up with your latest works...and am so glad I have the time...hugs, Ro
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I love this - It's beautiful.. dripping with imagery.
it's lovely
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This is an elixure, the ingredients of love potion number 9!
Beautiful, and passionate....loved it! -Darmok -
Sensuality awakening from as the sun's heat approaches. The imagery is so hot, natural. Elegant flow of sweet heat. A gentle breath or kiss. I love this.
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Oh my, do you know how to pick the graphics to go with your beatiful verses. this is an extardinary presentation to go with you lovely piece.
Cinara -
What impeccable background image! Your words wrap like the folds in the image around the mind; complex yet not completely concealing the contours of the meaning. Intracacy and intangibility are inseparable, but for those who are able to perceive beauty beyond compare. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,
Rage of Reason -
Zowie darlin!!! This one really is languid and steamy and dreamy and the list goes on and on. OK- I wanna know 1- Where are you getting your backgrounds and 2- How do you tile something onto your page? This is really, really beautiful on all counts. Great write, your ramble eloquently.... I really loved it all but these lines were awesome (the image of tears cried skyward is yummy):
Silvering, tears languish
Life flowers,
Blooms prosper, a sea of bliss,
once enlarged
These blooms cry,
Skyward...
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a turn-on
Loads of passion in this. Sexy, too. -
You ramble like a ramblin' rose, Sis (inspiring lovely thoughts and tranquil feelings).
< 3 Maureen
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This is so interesting ... I like it because it's not something I would ever write ... it's so different. I love it. Good write. -bRi*
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This was so pretty and dark at the same time, i love the background and i also love the messege of impurity that this sends, its really great. Well done Susan, well done!
Lynn -
I don't know what to say...I'm speechless hun. wow! This is just absolutely incredible. wow!
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Breathtaking write
These are the most beautiful ramblings, I have heard in quite some time! Just so wanting and dreamy~~ The picture is so amazing! But the poem, it says it all.
I think I noticed one typo? Fall froms lips cascades / should be falls from lips cascade? Not sure.
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wow, this flows so well i started day dreaming about it while reading it. great job. rambling poems are my favorite- they tell the most in the best way possible.
@$H -
wow this is amazing i love it i think that this was just absolutely beautiful.I think that you did a grand write here that is for sure.I thank you ever so much for shareing this with me.
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This poem has a delicate touch that falls softly on the eyes...I enjoyed reading it very much...thank you for this glimpse of what you are inside
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Loved the dreamy essence of this. The background set my mood before I even read the piece, wonderful use of the art. Beautifully written ~sigh~ thank you for sharing!
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i don't know which is more incredible, the poem or the background!!!
but they're both exquisite! susan, you never cease to amaze me!
blessed be
mike -
Oh, I LOVE the imagery here, I had to highlight it, since the picture in the background kinda distorted a little of it, but still very good. I felt like I had to grab hold of the words before they jumped off the page and ran off into the abise. Great poem.
Abby -
I think it's gorgeous. I love the feelings expressed...almost exploding off the page. Strangely enough...i feel that way today, so this hits me right at home. That feeling of wanting to just let it fly...become devoured by it...implode if necessary! lol
Yeah, liked it a lot!
UB
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copacetic
Wow! that poem is freakin' awesome! It's just so eloquent and the language is beautiful and deeply felt and well-thought out. If I didn't know better I'd think you were some sort of award-winning poet or something. -
You ramble eloquently Susan... I love the last two lines! Has a Shakesperian feel and so powerful!
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For things held dear,
That ache to share.
That disappear,
Absent of care.
No passions power can disguise,
The empty heart, if true love dies.
I know about this one susan. be blessed darlin
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Falls from my lips fall
-that's the ONLY line i dont like, because of the double "Fall"
i LOVE the background for this as well! this is gorgeous...i think it enhances the dreaminess that this poem portrays...
i love rambles
and this one rambles with beautiful words, making it so much better...my only suggestion, put the text in bold, so that it can be seen better...!!
oh...and WHERE did you get this?! if you can send it to me, message me and i can give you my msn or email
Nyx... -
Ramblings or not, it is beautiful Susan. And the background is breathtaking as well.
Wonderfully done, as always I never fail to enjoy reading your poems
-Heather -
Brilliant!!!!!! Susan, this is absolutely gorgeous!! I love the background , and your lovely words breath sweet life into it:)
Love ya,
Karen
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exhausted whispers..oh the sensuality from this piece leaks into compartments of my mind. great emotional energy, fuming from this write. especially loved the photo of woman on her abdomen dreaming in a fatigued position...lovely oh so very...
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chiante/ -
Wow. That was amazing! I absolutely love this poem! (Oh-- And your favorite book, is the best book/movie of all time!)
This poem is so vivid and descriptive! I just can't get over it. I'll be reading your other poems as well. Awesome job! Keep it up!
!~*YS4e*~!
Scarlett -
I don't know about you, but I enjoy the ramblings. It's more honest and random and emotion filled. Awesome job.
-Matt -
Awesome Sugar!!
the words with this background...just ahhhhhhhhh
It's breathtakingly beautiful
Much Love & Peace
~Pamela -
imagry touching in whispers felt by those who see with their hearts!
I did enjoy this!
Romance touched in a breath of time!
Keep penning on!
Bill -
Oh the background is just amazing Susan!!
I love it!
Golden sunsets...
Melting down,
Pierced longing love
Those lines just tie the poem and background
together..This is beautifulllll
I wouldn't change a thing
And you mention the Sea
I could picture the Sea in the distance
This was so Pretty ..What a wonderful job Hon!
Love and Smiles to you Susan Hope you are feeling better
Beautiful poem Sweety* Love ~Mina
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