The look in your eyes on the day that you left
Struck me like a knife
Left me cold and out of breath
I fell to my knees and begged you to stay
"Jut promise me baby your not going away"
I reapeted that line till my face turned blue
All I could say was "I still love you"
How can you walk away from all we've been through
Pretend you don't care
Leave my life without you
I have growen so close
With every promise that you made
There are still so many things I have left to say
What about the times you held me in your arms
Tell me now
Can you honestly say they ment nothing all along
You promised me forever
And baby I'm still here
Forevers not over and your no longer here
I heard about her
The one you left me for
And how in the world can she be the new girl you adore
No other could compair to me
Thats what you always said
But now shes the one that you say you'll never let go
You can't love her the way you loved me
Theres no way in the world shes all I could be
If your happy though I'll walk away
Just remeber forever
Because you'll want me back one day
Author notes
This is for a friend who b/f of 2 years just broke up with her, shes crushed. I just wish her the best .
A contest entry
- Your secret love by DepressedAngel.
621 points, ended April 13, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
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great poem good luck in my contest...BRAVO
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DepressedAngel
thanks hun im gald you enjoyed it and i hope you turn out with a lot of great writes....
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aww * tear *
God bless your friend! i wish her the best. this is a great poem! it is very sad but, it says alot. -
I relate
Really good, I like it alot. As you saw I went through similar so I wish your friend the best. Great write. You have the patience to rhyme! ^_^
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