im saying goodbye
to what i once knew
im saying goodbye
to the me and the you
im saying goodbye
to what i once felt
im saying goodbye
ya know the things that once made me melt
so im saying goodbye to you
and everything you bring
the fake love
the fake feelings
the fake hope
and the life that follows you here every time
im saying hello to the new and the great
deleting the sad
the heartache
the pain
and the fear
im saying goodbye
to all of the shit
im saying goodbye to you
A contest entry
- Tell Me The Truth. Did You Ever Love Me? by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a good poem, I don't belive in using "slang" or "text lang" in poems though, makes it seem less formal, same goes to swearing.
Good poem.
Thank you for entering and the best of luck goes to you!
Lullaby.x.
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OUTSTANDING!!
This is a great write AGAIN!!!!! You express emotions so well. I am looking for morphine addiction, but scrolling to look, this one caught my eye, another awesome write by you!!!!!!!
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This is such a good write..your words strong and powerful..it takes alot of strength to say goodbye but sometimes its the best thing to do..I can really relate to this keep writting your so talented
~Chrissy~
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