Baby, put me on a string
like a charm made of gold.
Take me everywhere you go.
So you'll always know,
I want to be with you forever.
Wear me close to your heart.
So we'll never be apart.
No matter where you go.
In the rain or snow,
I want to be with you forever.
We'll spend an eternity
sharing precious memories.
Drifting nice and slow.
Like the waves that ebb and flow.
I want to be with you forever.
Every morning noon or night
I want you always in my sight.
You give me pleasure's I can't ignore.
Stay with me for evermore.
I want to be with you forever.
We can live a life of bliss.
Enraptured in love and tenderness.
Until we reach that eternal shore
where we can ask for nothing more.
I want to be with you forever.
A contest entry
- ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
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Comments
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Wonderfully expressed! The repeating line was strong and poignant. This piece carries a very lyrical quality. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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Another wonderful write! Romantic and softly alluring. I also like the rhyme scheme you have used in this..very nice, very nice indeed!! Good luck in the contest..take care.
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So very pretty! I like this...so much! Softly romantic and just so full of heart
I wish you all the best in this contest!
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