Deep down dirt
steel wool
soul scrubbing
of baked in
bad bitter boy
build up
creates cleaner
more meaningful
mixtures
of humane
heart felt
real-life recipes.
A contest entry
- Fragment, Soulful Poetry (Quick Contest) by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 10, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting. Great alliteration and moving in a strange way. Very unique and soft, vivid, vibrant write. Loved it a lot. Very easeful. Thanks for entering my contest with this write!~
~Ryan~

