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Cleansing

Deep down dirt
steel wool
soul scrubbing

of baked in
bad bitter boy
build up

creates cleaner
more meaningful
mixtures

of humane
heart felt
real-life recipes.


A contest entry

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  • Ryno
    February 10, 2007

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    Interesting. Great alliteration and moving in a strange way. Very unique and soft, vivid, vibrant write. Loved it a lot. Very easeful. Thanks for entering my contest with this write!~
    ~Ryan~