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Electrifying (Triolet)

Electrifying
That's the sensation I get with you
Ecstasy without trying
Electrifying
Seems in Heaven I'm flying
Joy in everything we do
Electrifying
That's the sensation I get with you

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  • azure85 gold member
    February 10, 2007
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    This is great, GE has nothing on you! Short and sense, and so intense! Lovely triolet!


  • Ryno
    February 10, 2007
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    Wow, I think this is one of the best Triolets I've read [havent read very many] but it is still great, powerful and interesting. I love how you can just sum some emotion up with just one word Thanks for entering your fantastic piece!~
    ~Ryan~