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Thinking of You

I'm looking at the moon
hanging low in the sky
And I can't help but wonder
where you are
And if you're looking at this same moon
Thinking of me.

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I'll let it tell its own story, take you where it may.

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    June 17, 2007

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    Beautiful! It leaves so much for my imagination to ponder..many possibilities with this --splendid write..
    ~Pastel


  • Ryno
    February 10, 2007

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    I loved it, but I think "if your looking at the same moon I am" kind of whole thing is a little cliché. Great emotions, though. Thanks for entering!~~
    ~Ryan~