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Gold Shadow

Sun high in the sky
Gold shadow burns my eyes
Blinded by the lies

A contest entry

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  • Ryno
    February 10, 2007

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    Flawless and hard as steel. With the freedom of this contest though, I wish you could've used up a few more lines to explain more. Loved it though. Thanks for entering my contest!
    ~Ryan~