Wandering into the Satyr's Den
I beg of him please do me again
Take me and bend me right over the chair
Do it right here and now if you dare
Oh fuck me hard like a slut tonight
But you better be careful in case I bite
Pinch my nipples, squeeze my tits
While your going play with my clit
Shove your cock down my throat
Like a gravy train, I want a cum boat
Then I’ll tongue your ass
Like a blast from your past
Pump it in, pull it out
Give it to me till I shout
Hold me off, make me beg
The amount of our cum can fill a keg
Shove it up my ass, that’s fine
Take that step and cross the line
Share with friends if you want to
Show me what it is you do
Leave me sated, full of joy
Treat me like a new found toy
leave no doubt i know then
i've been back to the Satyr's Den
In a list
A contest entry
- I know you can write; pen some Delight. by Blueskywonder.
550 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice, and hanks for entering my contest, and goodluck
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Excellent write Jen, this is a very good and totally erotic display of love for your new Master.
**Master Ktulu**
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Whew! It's hot in here!
I'm likin' this, girl, yummm.
I don't generally like this type of poetry to rhyme, but it helped this one flow and I very much enjoyed it.
I love how open and carefree the author seems, O_~ Great job.
-Allura
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Intense
This is an extremely intense write - although I did get a feeling of almost a touch of anger there too (or was it being fed up?)
Nonetheless - a very interesting read - thank you
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I have no words,just...WOW!!!
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Oooowheeeeeeee... what a roller coaster of a ride this is... left me feeling all strange ,lol... what a hot burning write that has just blown me away.Well done and thankyou for entering my contest...also good luck.
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slipper, I shall go now and prepare my chamber, for I must have you again and again--you have left me breathless
the Satyr
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