As we sit behind the wall the sound of life in the air
Letting my fingers play with your beautiful hair
The look in your eye brings pace to my heart
Inside us we know we’ll never be apart
Yearn to stay for eternity close to you
By the wall near the fair and the sky so blue
Feel your head next to mine as you hold me tight
Been sitting here so long didn’t notice the night
Now the moons in the sky and our faces a light
Reflections of lunar in your eyes so bright
How I love you so on this blissful eve
In my Heart you’ll stay, never want you to leave
Our lips they brush, very gently so
Rush of love through our bodies as our feelings grow
Soft, warm and pure we move in together
Want to stay within your arms always, forever
Blissful beating of your heart, my head on your chest
Loves power so strong as together we rest
No matter the world when we have each other
Strength from within, a bond like no other
We walk to the lights lost in our world of the sublime
Noises distant from folk having a wonderful time
Only us in our minds as we walk by the stalls
Stop to win me a prize when the coconut falls
Illuminating colours bring new light to your face
How handsome you are… my heart soars through space
Truly blessed I feel to be here tonight
Our spirits touch on this beautiful night
Swirling lights all around, dizziness spins through my head
My body light as the breeze from the words you just said
Holding my face in your hands lights dance in your eyes
Sensitive mouths come together, hot touch electrifies
Waking to surroundings we move apart, but not too far
Holding hands along the road, shining auras like a star
Great energy we have me and you, you and I
Feeling whole, as one, no need for goodbye
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In a list
A contest entry
- I know you can write; pen some Delight. by Blueskywonder.
550 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance by Frodofan.
600 points, ended February 9, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i love this! the imagery is incredible. keep writing!
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Not bad. Rhythm could be a little more exact and consistent line to line,but it's a very pretty love poem. I like the imagery. It's very gentle.
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Omg. I don't know what to say about this poem.It has left me in awe.It actually made my heart ache for the guy i love soo much but can't be with.Almost feel like I can't feel that. If you know what i mean.
This poem is beautiful!
-Morgan
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Thank you
Thank you, I know what you mean, imagination is a brilliant gift
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This is a beautifuly heartfelt poem full of loving imagery and meaningful content.A true pleasure to read.Well done... thankyou for sharing such lovely thoughts and feelings with us.
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Thank you
Im so glad you like it, I am really happy with this write.
Just wish I was there by that wall he he
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