Love is blind to many things
Rosey glasses soften the edge
Because of this no alarm bell rings
As you hop from beneath my hedge
Your skin looks cool and smooth to me
Your eyes so large and deep
Were I to kiss you tenderly
I'd surely fall to sleep
No prince of love are you my friend
Naive we are carried along
Until we get too close to you
Then everything goes wrong
A contest entry
- Kiss me and make me your prince by El Pescador.
1800 points, ended February 17, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol loved it
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Lol, this is definately a winner,lol
brilliant. Well done and thankyou for sharing.
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Thanks Stephen
Glad it made ya laugh 
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good luck in the contest with the contes with this fun but rather deep write
very good work.
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Lol deep ha ha yeah maybe he he
I have a thing more for frogs than toads tho so next time I'll be on the look out for a frog prince he he. Thanks for your support
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