Mundane madness
slips away
through cracked concrete
Weekend wonders unfurl
with satin sheet separated
Love's lasting impression
tattooed on flesh fresh
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And the heat ingites! Woot! Beautifully and tastefully done. I found this highly erotic with few words. Yumexcellent.
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OOH!!! I liked this... it was way erotic without actually being raunchy... i deffinitely loved this poem!
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Oh so lovely... the imagery and feeling of this poem is marvelous... leaves me in dreamland, it does. Lovely poem!
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Very nicely written mum.
Lil
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Most awesomely written! Your wording and presentation are very well done, my dear friend! So much said in so very few lines! All the best to you!!!
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nice little poem My lioness leaves a scene of images to conjure up after redaing it as to what those sheets experienced
lovely as always
love,
Master
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beautiful..but your work always is..but ooh that tickles
good luck in the contest with this lovely write, i see we are in competition but i beleive i should have known better than to try
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Such divine imagery always graces the pages of your poetry. You did a beautiful job here. Good luck in the contest!
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So descriptive and intensely grasping. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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